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August 1st, 2005, 1:47 am

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Reply adamacus, August 1st, 2005, 9:35 am

Tone... I thought you said you weren't going to tone any more of the pages?
It looks better this way though.

Reply Frothy, August 1st, 2005, 11:49 am

he said if he didn't like the page he drew, he wouldn't shade it.

Reply roxietran, August 1st, 2005, 3:08 pm

^^ Well one I'm a "She" so ... Page 3 is going to be redrawn someday so I didn't want to waste time toning it.

Reply zarinov, August 3rd, 2005, 4:14 pm

Shes right She is indeed a she, and i can vouch for her. Nice comics, but it tells no story, seems more like an independnt picture.

Reply kitty_the_goddess_of_doom, August 6th, 2005, 12:54 am

so pretty!!! i wish my manga was this good!!!

Reply rhino, August 8th, 2005, 6:38 pm

Perspective... Still, I gotta say perspective... PERSPECTIVE!! If you are going to draw a house like that, maybe take it and place basic 2 point perspective. Also, the shading on the house could be more eleborate, to give it more depth. Your character looks great, don't sacrifice the rest of the artwork just for that. It seems like you go WOO HOOO when drawing the guy (which I think is VERY well done!) and then when you get to the bg and house, it's like "meh, get r dun." Otherwise, she's lookin' alright. BG behind the house could use some darker shading (like dark weight). It's daylight... draw in some shaddows.. use the fire's light to offset with the trees.

Also, the house is on fire and the door is missing half of it. WHere is the debris? Needs to be crap EVERYWHERE!!

Reply roxietran, August 9th, 2005, 3:50 am

Thanks Williampalacio lol, you seem to be the one person that seems to think the story will be good just from a few pages. Thx kitty.
Rhino: I suck at perspective, this pretty much happens when I don't plan something out fully (like the design of the house) that I end up just winging it to get the page done. Thx for your critique though.

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