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August 22nd, 2005, 2:21 am

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Reply roxietran, August 22nd, 2005, 2:22 am

Right on time, I hope this somewhat clarifies things a bit. Though it's still a mystery overall.

Reply holyknight, August 22nd, 2005, 1:58 pm

BUM BUM BUM!!!

Reply rhino, August 22nd, 2005, 10:36 pm

Maybe sound effects? Actually, I love this comic, but you might think of sound effects, just minimal, like he's panting in pain, or patting out the fire on his sleeve. The panel makes sense. Something is strange about the boy that creates fire. The reason the house is smoking or on fire is cause of the boy and it's some gift he has that maybe he doesn't even know about. I am guessing the next comic will be the boy awaking and maybe sheding some light on this? ehe? Good comic!

Reply roxietran, August 22nd, 2005, 11:18 pm

Thx a lot Rhino, sound effects is a good point. I'm not sure what exactly would patting out the fire sound/spell out as, do you? >_< o_O; Interesting guesses Rhino lol ... >_<; Well I'll say a small spoiler now and say the mystery remains a mystery for a long while because it's not the focus of my story currently. Sorry to disappoint anyone if they're waiting for this to be an action story but it's not, genre type this would fit in is drama and growing up. Thanks again Rhino!

Reply spoonerman, August 23rd, 2005, 5:07 pm

hmmm i've read teh comic so far and the story seems ok but one thing that i think needs improving is the characters stances. most of the time they seem to static and don't seem to give off the motion that you are probably going for, well thats all i got to say.

Reply rhino, August 24th, 2005, 2:12 am

For sound effects, don't use "pat pat." Here is what I do. I actually would (in this case) hit my arm and think of how to translate that into words. So maybe a "smack" sound? You decide... it's totally up to you. But don't over do it... of course. :D And yeah, we get it... it's a drama... I'm just over imagining things like I usually do. ;) So there isnt going to be a nuclear sub-automic-armed dinosaur from the planet Breifcase Manifold 5.6 then? Damn.

Reply roxietran, August 28th, 2005, 5:28 pm

Sorry Sorry for the slow response, smack would work, though I think the hardest thing is figuring out where to place it exactly. I'll think about how to put it in, thx again Rhino.

Reply roxietran, August 28th, 2005, 5:32 pm

Sorry Sorry for the slow response, smack would work, though I think the hardest thing is figuring out where to place it exactly. I'll think about how to put it in, thx again Rhino.

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